I fall upon the thorns of life
belittled, I bleed,
but life has roses somewhere
I still believe.
No matter how dark and dreary
the tunnel of life seems
there’s light at the end
I still believe.
What if the roads don’t lead anywhere?
What if I see a dead end ahead?
Life’s a journey ongoing
I still believe.
Doesn’t matter if someone’s bad
doesn’t matter if he punches you hard,
the world is essentially good
I still believe.
© Amritbir Kaur
12 comments:
Our belief is what keeps us going :) very well written!!Keep up!
Life's all about believing isn't it. :)
u know what....no one can assess the perfection and you are the perfectionist!
keep up ur amazing jotting.
What subject you choose
How hard or easy it is
You write good poem
I still believe !!
A human can succeed at almost anything for which he has unlimited ENTHUSIASM.This thing is sure, that your imagination,creativeness is ultimate,as this is - "I Believe..."
Regds
Shukar
A human can succeed at almost anything for which he has unlimited ENTHUSIASM.This is sure, that your imagination,creativeness is ultimate b'coz - "I BELIEVE ".
Shukar
Hi!
Beautifully written words on HOPE,
The ray of hope is what leads each individual and without that the world is to stand still,so let hope lead us forth each second...thanks :)
Its short and sweet , conveying what the verse wanted...to say.!!
Dear Amritbir,
Incredible thoughts carved into a beautiful poem.
Belief is something which always helps us to put back the sorrows and failures and gives the courage and intensity to move on!
Hope to get many more of such compilations.
Its always a pleasure reading your poems.Its a soothing sensation that overwhelms at the end of the read.Thanks for sharing.Keep bring such gems often :)
"I still believe.." is what makes all the difference :)
awesome
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