What if I can’t cry
when heart is heavy,
I still can wipe a tear
with my laughing eyes.
What if I can’t fly
even if heart wishes to,
I still can soar high
with daring dreams.
What if words fail me
when it is most important,
I still can surely make
my silence expressive.
What if I can’t have
what I wish to,
I still can achieve
what I aspire to.
when heart is heavy,
I still can wipe a tear
with my laughing eyes.
What if I can’t fly
even if heart wishes to,
I still can soar high
with daring dreams.
What if words fail me
when it is most important,
I still can surely make
my silence expressive.
What if I can’t have
what I wish to,
I still can achieve
what I aspire to.
© Amritbir Kaur
9 comments:
Good one man!
where there is will, there's always a way out :)
Thanks Issam for your encouraging feedback and also for adding new insights to the poem.
what if i can't stop myself reading your creation....
i m sure if i stop i'll sure bury my passion....
awesome composition...
cudn't take my eyes off it...
keep rolling ji...
Poem has so many meanings that man can achieve even in failure.
In every part of poem what it dererves from a achiever is "Confidence"
Thanks for posting this.
Beautiful... There is a gleam at the end of every verse despite the odds i feel...
Beautiful! Optimism at its best....Great work done Amritbir.
Take care!
I visited the blog and really liked the poems. What if , is really too good , makes look things better at many tough ends,basically at cross-roads of life and situations.
great work.
Regds
Onkarjot Singh
Thanks Puneet Kaur ji for your optimistic analysis.
Beautiful lines expressing the "I can do" spirit even in adverse circumstances
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