I relishingly recollect
the much cherished moments,
those that have stayed back
those that never did backtrack;
when I only had skinned knees
when dreams were stringed to toys
when nothing in the world was bad
when all I had around were joys…
The time of innocent wisdom
and not of wise deprivation
nothing of the chains that bind
nothing of that long silence;
the time I heard myself prattle:
didn’t have to unravel my silence.
It’s that time I was reminded …
Something that’s not yet detached,
no matter how far away
a memory in mind that forever will stay.
Sitting, I travel far a mile
and I smile for a while…
© Amritbir Kaur
10 comments:
You have expressed in a amzing way the beauty of childhood. A pleasure to read I also smile for a while
and i smile for a while...
that smile brings the happiness pile...
keep smiling that's all i say...
sorrows wud run out of ur way...
again a brilliant composition from your magical pen...
A beautiful poem that everyone will rekate to.it is written very well
Hello,
Nice creation...
Good memories of those grt days!
Regards,
Dimple
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while reading this poem i feel as if dealing with true happiness....rather perfect one..
heyyyy...lovelyy one..Keep writing..;)
Have a nice time..
amazing write! you have nicely expressed your feelings... the end says it all;
Sitting, I travel far a mile
and I smile for a while…
it's indeed pleasure to read you.
Childhood is so precious. These moments keep coming back to us in our times of quiet retrospection. It is a heart warming experience too to be reminded of those fun filled days. Very nicely portrayed here.
goosebumps....that was d vry first expression...seriously...u r awesome...
sonakshi~
goosebumps...that was my frst reaction..srsly....u r awesome..
sonakshi`
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